“Tom stay at home and after your younger brother for awhile I’m out to buy some groceries,” asked mother “ok,” I replied. While mother was out I decided to go to my room to do my homework.
After awhile, I felt very hungry so I decided to cook some instant noodles to feel up my tummy. I went into the kitchen to boil some water and I went back into my room to continue to do my.
While l was doing my work, my brother kept on disturbing me yelled at him and push him out of my room and I slam on the door and looked it up, I felt sleepy and decided to take a nap.
When I woke up, I could smell smoke. I immediately rush out of the room the whole place was on fire, I saw my brother laying unconscious in the living room. I quickly rush towards him and carry him, I try to escape but the flames were licking the whole room, I ran to my room, took a blanket and cover me and my brother. I charge towards the door and knocked down the door and ran to a safe spot
A few minutes later, the fire fighters and the ambulance have come. The fire fighters
Put out the fire very quickly and the ambulance has brought my brother to the hospital, I was glad that my brother was fine.
For that day on, I promised that never to cook noodles when I was sleeping.
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Dear Gy,
The story is complete. Good! You can also slow down the part when you smelled smoke. Describe your thoughts and fear. Then describe your actions when you saw your unconscious brother.
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